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It's Unfair, Isn't It?
Contributed by
russianroulette
on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 05:48:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's unfair, isn't it?
Sometimes,
I wish Love can exceed past boundaries
past criticism
without any hesitations...
or limits...
or opinion.
But we go on with these sort of lives,
tolerating everything
with our sense of sight and hearing.
We begin to no longer care
about what's around.
If we're able to make it through the day...
you and I can smile again.
And everything's just fine.
Even though it isn't.
Copyright ©
russianroulette
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2007-07-07 17:48:26]
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Re: It's Unfair, Isn't It?
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 03:16:29 AM AEST
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Holy crap. I can relate to this too well. Your last lines were dead on...
"And everything's just fine.
Even though it isn't."
...god this pulls at my heart. Well penned.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: It's Unfair, Isn't It?
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:17:40 PM AEST
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Ya i agree with Laura on this.
sometimes life is just not fair ,
good write |
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