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Crying Eyes Can't Hide
Contributed by
SugarCoatedSweetness
on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Oh Crying Eyes
You Wear A Disguise
From The World Your Tears You Try To Hide
When You're Hurting Inside
A Smile You Try To Make
But You Know It's Fake
Pretend Everything's Ok
You Go Through This Everyday
How Should You Feel
When It's Something That You Just Can't Deal
You Try To Hide But Your Heart's Not Hidden
Who Are You Kidding
Only Yourself
No One Else
They Know
Because It Shows
Copyright ©
SugarCoatedSweetness
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2003-03-01 18:00:00]
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Re: Crying Eyes Can't Hide
(User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:08:28 PM AEST
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| this works so well, succinct, sharp, precise, are words that come to mind, but whatever it grabs ya, |
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Re: Crying Eyes Can't Hide
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:18:48 PM AEST
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| i love it...i have written a poem very much like this... |
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Re: Crying Eyes Can't Hide
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:54:46 AM AEST
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| I truly can relate to this feeling... Awesome write :) |
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