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But Love's What Kept Me There . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 05:51:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There you stood above the rest
majesticaly devine,
you must have heard my hearts request
wishing you were
mine.
And to this day
it's still that way my heart with you i share,
your beauty brought me to you but
love's
what kept me
there.
"Tis said that looks aren't everything
if one's heart isn't true,
i guess that i was meant to have
my cake and eat it
to.
In you i saw tomorrow
before it even came, you took away my sorrow
and then my heart and
name.
Yes there you stood above the rest
the farest of the fare,
your beauty brought me to you
but love's what kept me
there.
Ben
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Re: But Love's What Kept Me There . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 06:49:21 AM AEST
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this is very beautiful as all your writes are.. such dedication and devotion.. well put
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: But Love's What Kept Me There . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 11:15:02 AM AEST
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from the romance king lol a lovely write as always my friend.
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Re: But Love's What Kept Me There . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:24:00 PM AEST
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| A message from a heart that once I knew...these words echo the could have been and should have been of my life. Strange that your love poem should remind me of a time when being loved by another.....just wasn't enough at that time...my memories...triggered by your writing. Excellent write as always. |
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Re: But Love's What Kept Me There . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 01:19:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Love is a powerful thing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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