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Silent Tears
Contributed by
troubled
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Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 04:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Alone there in your jungle
you cry the silent tears
emotions out on day release
all your hopes and fears
in public though, all happy
the appearance of a clown
you dont want to take others with you
when you know your falling down
life is full of challenges
some are good and some are bad
these are when you need a friend
to help lighten the load a tad
you dont want to be a burden,
you sometimes just need an ear
someone to hold you oh so tight
and let you cry them silent tears
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troubled
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2007-07-06 16:36:54]
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Re: Silent Tears
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by Bruce on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 04:53:34 PM AEST
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| How very true. I have been there. Great write |
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Re: Silent Tears
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:19:45 AM AEST
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Great write, I agree with Bruce...a read one can easily relate to, written with honesty. I can really relate to that last stanza....good stuff.
Peace,
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Re: Silent Tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:47:19 AM AEST
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this is a very passionate heartfelt sad write. everyone does need a shoulder to cry on. and you put that into word excellent
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Silent Tears
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by funnyface09 on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 12:38:13 PM AEST
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silent tears are more hearbreaking than crying it outloud..
thanks for sharing..great write.. |
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