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Can You Find The Words
Contributed by
bruce
on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:26:01 PM in AEST
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Can You Find Th e Words
Can you find the words
to tell me how you feel
Is this love we have
for fun or is it real
I know ,in my case
there isn't any doubt
That the love I have for you
is ready to break out
Hopefully my dear
your feelings, are that way as well
And you can find the words
So I can stand up and yell
She loves me, she loves me
and I want the world to know
How much we are in love
wherever we tend to go
As each day passes by
I wait for you to say
Those magical words of love
so we can be on our way
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-07-06 15:26:01]
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:34:45 PM AEST
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awww that is beautiful
you did great on this lol
you sure know how to write about love. :) |
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:35:31 PM AEST
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awww...the patience of love :)
I remember, developing those feelings and just waiting for them to say it back...
Great write |
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by troubled on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST
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| I love it !!... Brilliantly written from the heart xx |
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:43:15 AM AEST
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a simply deep expressive write of love.. gives you a feeling of joy and happiness from this poem.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:08:28 AM AEST
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Once again another testimony of love produced with your poetic charms my friend.
I wish you the very best.
Michelle |
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Re: Can You Find The Words
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by funnyface09 on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 12:45:20 PM AEST
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words are sometimes so hard to find when it comes to the matters of the heart...
wish you luck...
thanks for sharing,lovely... |
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