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A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:21:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Be it ever so humble
so goeth the song but i beg to differ
i dare say there wrong,
if home's where the heart is then is it not true?
be it ever so loving
there's no place like
you.
Then a song or a poem
or even a play are things i only once knew,
and yet there i was
on the stage of life falling in love with
you.
Looking at you was imencely pleasing
how easy you caught my eye,
as though in my heart i needed a reason
to never let you slip
by.
Be it ever so loving
there's no place like you
at least not in this man's life,
as long as i live to you i will give
what is rightfully yours as my
wife,
"And what might that be? "
you ask of me, gently caressing my face,
to thee i respond fom love and beyond,
in thyne heart my love shall i
place.
For yours is the heart of an angel
posessed of a love so true, laced with the soul
of a sweet cinderella ne'er again
shall i love one as
you.
Ben
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Re: A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:21:29 AM AEST
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aww this is simply stunning.. such dedication and love in this.. its like a little story you can tell children about love. wonderful job.
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:22:55 AM AEST
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Stunning write that left tears in my eyes. I could picture your lovely wife gently touching your face. Your love is precious, absolutely positively precious. You lucky man, you. Thank you always...for sharing this love story of yours. It is the most wondrous love.
Much peace, love and hugs to you and yours,
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Re: A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
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by Bruce on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 02:35:19 AM AEST
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| Fantastic write Ben, just loved every word |
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Re: A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 08:06:59 AM AEST
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Ben, my friend,
this is more beautifull than Cindarella.
Perfectly beautifull.
mucho smiles, big huggs to you both,
emy |
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Re: A Sweet Cinderella . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 08:31:19 AM AEST
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beautifully loving, i adore these words placed as thus:
be it ever so loving
there's no place like
you.
love n' hugs nessa
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