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azure afternoon

Contributed by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry




  • a scent wafted across the room, the air lite as a berry
    twinkling of windchimes, guitar music plucked merry,
    curtains shuttered in the breeze, trees swayed featherlike
    through the glass spoke sunlight, as notes did spike,
    ~*~
    a flute drifted along as the forest smiled, sweet sound
    gentle piano keys were added, there softly to resound,
    to make one gaze up at the sky, harmonious euphony
    animals listened and bees paused, whilst making honey,
    ~*~
    a sweeter world it is, furniture made by the gift of trees
    life circles, artsy branches permanent canopy marquee,
    swift cloud passes overhead, then vivid lasting vermilion
    and here sit i, in the midst of natures beautiful pavilion.

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    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:31:20 AM AEST
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    wow a stunning marvelous write.. beautiful imagery in this.. I loved this piece.. reminds me of a story.. lovely absolutely lovely!!

    vampyress Jenni


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by shelby on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 09:07:17 AM AEST
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    A most stunning write my friend, beauty at its finest.

    Happy fourth

    Michelle


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 09:14:11 AM AEST
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    I agree with Michelle and emy here .
    This write is amazingly stunning.
    Great job

    hugs


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by emystar on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:19:48 PM AEST
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    Incredibly beautifull write, girlfriend.
    huggs, smiles,
    emy


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:05:21 PM AEST
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    A lucid lesson in the key of beautiful. Simply
    music 2 my ears. BRAVO MAESTRO NESSA
    LA MUSICA CONTESSA . . .

    ((((Nessa))))


    Ben


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Bruce on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:33:45 PM AEST
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    A real beauty Nessa, just loved it.


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Dom on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:21:28 PM AEST
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    Oh Nessa this is so captivating and beautiful, your descriptions have taken me into a very tranquil mood.

    Lovely write,
    Dom


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 11:49:32 PM AEST
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    Nessa this was breathtaking!! Absolutely!!

    I was transported to a forest myself with your beautiful descriptions and
    could actually hear the amazing sounds of music that the forest creates,
    along with the flute and piano you have interwoven here. This reminds
    me a little of those mood CD's where, if you close your eyes, you actually
    feel like you are experiencing it in FULL life! wow.

    wonderful job. Just a splendid, splendid write!

    ~Breezy


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Nazmythian on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:03:42 PM AEST
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    My personal favorite ... ?

    "through the glass spoke sunlight..."

    That alone speaks volumes.

    Wonderful, Nessa

    Nazzy ~


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Spike on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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    Lucky gal - how can you think yourself cloaked in anything but beauty, because it shines through - yours and that rustic Eden you describe (then again, how can any of us think that way, when we are above ground and lucky enough to be living the moment, when we remember to).

    ps: loved the Cowley quote, and thanks for your genuine and wonderful comments.

    S.


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 04:59:47 AM AEST
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    This is truly a great nature piece!
    The images, the feelings it evokes, what it says....and most especially what it doesn't say!
    I am transported!


    Re: azure afternoon (User Rating: 1 )
    by colinb on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:28:08 AM AEST
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    beautifuly descriptive




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