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uselessness
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:40:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Drowning in a sea of uselessness
she lays idle
despair latches on like a leech
the answers of her darkened life
seem oh so out of reach
The lesson given
she learned it well
hiding wounds that never heal
she smiles at you
pretending its ok
but inside the pain is burning every day
Vampyress Jenni
Copyright ©
Phantomvampyress
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2007-07-05 07:40:17]
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Re: uselessness
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:06:18 AM AEST
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I always like knowing why someone wrote something
Like what was the motivation, the inspiration.
Kinda short
But its like....
A mother hiding her problems for others wouldnt worry? |
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Re: uselessness
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:06:41 AM AEST
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Oh yeah!
It was good
I liked it. |
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Re: uselessness
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:32:10 AM AEST
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vividly insightful compassionate images, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: uselessness
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 11:10:56 AM AEST
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this is so deep and heartfelt....... beautiful in its sadness...... our mothers seem to forget once we get older we know their pain even if they dont want to admit it.
Michelle |
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Re: uselessness
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:09:18 PM AEST
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The seperation of you and yet who ever you write about is fascinating, and yet you manage to get the feeling of the peice across in such a delicate yet maeningful way.
very lovely Jenn . . .
Ben |
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Re: uselessness
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:35:33 PM AEST
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| Really deep, just beautiful and very well written. |
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Re: uselessness
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by Mila on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:06:35 PM AEST
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| Wow that's deep and sad but i like how you put into such short words, i can feel the impact! |
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Re: uselessness
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by wheels on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:24:54 PM AEST
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very awesome write. Very dark and emotionals but beautiful in its performance. Nice flow - love it.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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