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Find Me
Contributed by
tarickk
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 04:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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We may have never met
but I know you.
I know you better than I know myself.
I know what you love,
I know what you hate,
I know what makes you smile,
I know what makes you cry,
I know your dreams and I know your fears.
I know who you want to be,
and I know who you will never be.
I want you to know me.
I want you to love me.
But most of all I need you
To find me.
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tarickk
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2007-07-05 04:33:15]
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Re: Find Me
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by untitled on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:42:44 AM AEST
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| lovely, but who is it your talking to? it might make it a bit more powerful, if you gave insight to that. |
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Re: Find Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:43:49 AM AEST
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this is a well flowing write. sounds like your searching for the one who is out there and asking them to find you.. great job if that is the messege you are conveying to the reader.. its well put together..
vampyress Jenni |
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