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The broken bone and the Soma queen
Contributed by
runawaynameless
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 03:19:52 AM in AEST
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I knew it was going to happen,
I was going to fall into the pattern you set out for me,
Lets see how well she takes it,
shes broken,
so she tries to hurt others.
Shes now ruthless,
you made me what you see,
it was inevitable,
I held out so long,
now I feel like a whore.
I dont want you,
but I will be with you anyway,
you cant hurt me,
because the damage you wish to put upon me,
has already been mastered.
The soma queen did it,
she did it yes,
she broke my ankle and gave me a pill,
now I am on my way,
I will hate like youve hated,
no no I wont.
I will be numb like you wished me,
I feel nothing!!!
I know nothing!!!
I want nothing but my ***** soma queen!
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2007-07-05 03:19:52]
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Re: The broken bone and the Soma queen
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by untitled on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:45:33 AM AEST
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powerful. i know wut u feel dude,
life's a *****. |
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Re: The broken bone and the Soma queen
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:46:27 AM AEST
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a very interesting write.. its very powerful and it seems to be full of anger in some spots.. im not exactly sure the messege of this piece but its well worded.
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Re: The broken bone and the Soma queen
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 10:56:56 AM AEST
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Sounds like alot of emotional turmoil....... Intense and powerful write happy fourth of July by the way
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