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My Smiling Angel
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 07:33:00 PM in AEST
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When I saw your picture
It was your smile that attracted me
It was your smile that had me stared for a few minutes
Acting like a fool while looking at your picture
I smiled to myself
And I know I am laughing inside my heart
Because I finally found a smile
That melts my heart
That make me feel I am falling in love
How I wished I could hug you this very moment
To tell you I really do care about you
And you are in my thoughts all the time
If you knew, if only you know
If only I have the courage to tell you
I sighed and looked at the picture again
Looked at that smile again
I smiled to myself
Knowing something is best left unsaid
Knowing something is best kept inside the heart
I whispered ‘I love you my smiling angel’
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2007-07-04 19:33:00]
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Re: My Smiling Angel
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 08:32:23 PM AEST
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| If your smiling angel is for real, do tell him. The words of the poem are beautiful. |
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Re: My Smiling Angel
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:02:04 AM AEST
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wow this is a very passionate heartfelt write.. I absolutely loved the last stanza best.. I agree with the comment above perhaps you should tell this person your feelings.. great job
Vampyress jenni |
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