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MELTING IN YOUR ARMS

Contributed by emystar on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 02:18:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics
























SultryRose's Signatures





When we touch souls, troubles fade.
You make me feel like a priceless jade.
You light a flame beyond compare.
Such passions we eternally share.

We dance to the music alnight
Alone in glimmering candle light.
I'm just melting in your arms.
You sway me with magnetic charms.
Melting in your strong arms.

We've never touched but our souls do.
Just wonna eternally slow dance with you.
Wonna snuggle entwined together.
Our luv rocks in stromy weather.

No one else can move me this way.
Can melt into you any ole day.
Only distence can keep us a part
But I only luv you sweet heart.





Copyright © emystar ... [ 2007-07-04 14:18:24]
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 11:58:58 PM AEST
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WOW; Just beautiful


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:30:02 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Emy. Slow dancing is soooooo sweet with someone who can melt you. *smiles*
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:38:09 AM AEST
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awww what a beautiful write
you did great

hugs


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 05:07:03 AM AEST
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Great piece of poetry.
I kinda got confused on how I should read it
I thought maybe a comma over here might make it seem good.


When we touch souls, all troubles fade.
You make me feel like a priceless jade.

Ah its your work.
I am not at the liberty to change it.
Just throwing it out there :)


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:17:08 AM AEST
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oh emy this is so romantic and sweet! beautifully written!

hugs n' love nessa

roses


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:47:12 AM AEST
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What a day for a coming back and reading what is an absolute treasure and sight for saw eyes . . . happy 4th and it be ever so humble lol.

((((((emy))))))


Ben


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:03:39 AM AEST
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wow marvelous.. this is such a beautiful and passionate write.. you can feel the love.. very well composed..

vampyress jenni


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:53:43 PM AEST
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makes me melt just reading it so lovely

Michelle


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:58:43 AM AEST
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emy, you ole softie!! ; )

Damn woman! This transported me into the most ethereal
and beautiful dream ... *siiiiiiiigh*

I welcome these emotions and embrace these moments
with all I am. Thank you for sharing this. It's stunning, hun.

*raises a glass to slow dancin'*

~Breezy


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:11:47 PM AEST
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Emy, a lovely romantic declaration. The perfect rhyme scheme was a little heavy, though -maybe some half-rhymes at the end of the lines would make the expression a bit smoother. Lots of wonderful images and teases.

S.


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 08:26:49 AM AEST
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What an excellent write. Tender as the strings softly stroked on a harp. A flute with the pitch of perfection and melody of a butterfly drifting in air. Just plain passion, perfect poetic genius.


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 12:45:32 AM AEST
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ooh
I'm melting....
you know I love slow dancing,
come to me
and
lets snuggle.


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:45:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic write hun, with sensual imagery.

Lovely,
Dom


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 12:43:58 AM AEST
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nice pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and loved melting in your poem..............................veenu


Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 06:11:29 PM AEST
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Your words painted a vivid picture, you set the atmosphere very nicely.
Take care,
David




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