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Slow Dancing....in a daze.
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 11:28:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to dance
with you
oh so slow
and let lovin' flow
ohh
I like it
when we pause
then tenderly kiss
and you
hmmm moan.
It's so hot
as our bodies rock
and I
never ever want it to stop.
I wanna
dance oh so slow
with you alone
and feel sweet sensations explode
as love melts
and sweetly flows.
In my arms you are swaying
music plays in the background
and the lights are dim
so there are no distractions
there is no need for talking
only soft moaning
as our entwined bodies
cause a passionate reaction.
Sensations start flowing
as you whisper in my ear
you are telling me move slower
I say like this
you say yeahhh....
It's so hot
don't wanna stop
I love it
slow dancing in a daze.....
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Re: Slow Dancing....in a daze.
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 12:55:34 PM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwoo my handsome prince,
If this is writers block I can't wait till the damn breaks.
This write gives me that un explainable feeling right in the gut.
Your flows just melt me into a smiling idiot.
More please.
always luv, big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Slow Dancing....in a daze.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 01:33:49 PM AEST
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a very passionate intesne heart felt write.. great expression and wording.. exquisite
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Slow Dancing....in a daze.
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by Dom on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:31:54 PM AEST
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So passionate and sensual, very nice read.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Slow Dancing....in a daze.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 04:51:23 AM AEST
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| It has an almost musical rhythmn to it. great images...not so much visual as sensual. Very much so! |
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