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just go away
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 11:14:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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CAN I DIE
CAN I CRY
DO I WALK AWAY AND SAY GOODBYE
DO I LOVE YOU EVEN THOUGH YOU HATE ME
DO I STAY ,JUST WAIT AND SEE
DO I MOVE ON ,DO I GO AWAY
WILL IT HELP IF I SIT AND PRAY
DO YOU LOVE ME DO YOU LEAVE ME
DO YOU JUST SET ME FREE
CAN I BREATH CAN I FEEL
IS THIS LIFE I SEE SOMETHING REAL
IS IT FAKE LIKE YOUR IMPLANTED BREASTS
DO WE HAVE TO FIGHT FOREVER ,CAN WE TAKE A REST
DO YOU LOVE ME , DO YOU EVEN CARE
AND WHAT'S WITH THAT EVIL STARE
I'M LETTING YOU GO
SO NOW YOU KNOW
JUST WALK AWAY ,GET LOST
I DON'T CARE ANYMORE ,I CUT MY COST
ONE LESS MOUTH TO FEED
NO MORE MY HEART WILL BLEED
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-07-04 11:14:35]
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Re: just go away
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 02:41:56 PM AEST
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I hear you loud-n-clear.
Sad but very determined write.
I know the thoughts and feelings.
Good work, my friend.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: just go away
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by Spell_Weaver on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 02:46:30 PM AEST
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Very powerful write! I can relate... my last relationship came to a very sudden and very painful ending, and I still had to see him every day until graduation. I finally came to a point where I confronted him on his mixed signals and told him either we take each other back or we walk away forever. But all I wanted was for the pain to go away. I have since then moved on and found someone I can be happier with. I hope you find the same. Don't let the past keep you from seizing your future. Carpe Diem!
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Re: just go away
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:01:51 AM AEST
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| I totally agree with Emy. Great write |
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Re: just go away
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by endlesspath on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:31:42 PM AEST
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yes make them know they cant hurt you anymore.
why do they like to play on the heart so
i can not tell you why, just tell them bye and move on. find you another who will love and not hurt. well least not hurt you intentionally or all the time. nothings perfect
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