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Relaxing

Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



The washing is waiting now to be hung
I have breakfast dishes still to be done
Must swing the mop over these floors,
Even maybe wipe the cupboard doors

The bathroom is a mess, looks full of mud
Oh, I’ll need extra elbow grease on that tub

Remains from yesterdays little fishing trip
Editors note: next time find a sandy place you drip!!
So now I’m wasting my time sitting at the pc
Trying to write down some rough poetry

And really I guess I had better get off my....
Where? … and go and get a few things done
Have still to get outside and mow those lawns
I’ll even dig out a few of those blasted thorns
Lastly the children would like to get to the beach
Eventually; all I’d like, is to find a comfy seat!!

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Relaxing.



Mick Puttock





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Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:39:35 PM AEST
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old things sometimes need to be rerun as this poem. A very good write I enjoyed it.

Sharon


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:40:11 PM AEST
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great write mick as always like the editors note too :D


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:39:51 AM AEST
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I so loved this one Mick Nice to see you posting on your site! Great one I will have to post this on my frig! So I can rest awhile!Christina


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:35:20 PM AEST
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oh isn't life great, always 10 things to do, and enough time to do 7.
Great write. I enjoyed it
Jeff


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 10:29:43 PM AEST
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ahhhh this is cute, makes me looks towards the nice spring and better weather, i've had quite enough of winter i do believe, or am i totally mad as im look forward to spring cleaning now lol huggs and love to you and yours, always nessa


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:19:06 AM AEST
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Enjoyed this again.... I'm glad to see you posting again....
NOW..time to start WRITING again.... :>)
Hugs...
Jen


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:29:47 AM AEST
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very enjoyable write reminds me to rest awhile ..i cant ..dishes are piling up ...

great one


keep on writing

peace be your journey
Terry



Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:30:54 PM AEST
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relax????????? Whats that??????????? Come on the chores need to be done!!!!!!!!
fun write to read!!

mckayla


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:38:34 PM AEST
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You put it correctly. It sure tells poetically
our life's busy-ness.......




Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:46:15 AM AEST
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Im just getting to reading your work. Well done.l I know the feeling.
Michelle


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:05:40 AM AEST
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This is a very good write...I'm going to read your other ones too :-)


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:30:31 AM AEST
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you have captured this well... i can see it... blessings... michele


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 10:49:23 AM AEST
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This poem's a poem indeed
-------------------------------------
I'm now a wee bit older
not necessarily wiser,
I thought Mick was a guy,
I would suggest Pfiser..

Now it might be that
Flowers are faster
Love someone to tell me
The sex of Webmaster...


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:16:57 AM AEST
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this made me smile - sounds like my house LOL


merry


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:05:30 PM AEST
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hi mick,
this is very real and good at the same time.
you sound like a father that truely care for his family.
i like this.


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 06:44:25 AM AEST
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..well organised thoughts...well arranged words..good sequences..shows your talent as a great poet..you have done it with wonderful ease sir.best wishes always
sincerely.. venkat


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:49:22 PM AEST
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Very entertaining poem, its real and has universal appeal. Enjoyed reading this, well done.
~ Wendy


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:31:12 AM AEST
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Well done sir,..this is quite refreshing..I liked the way how you used the words in such a moulding. K


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:07:33 PM AEST
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Ahhh, I've read this one a few times.
I know what it's like. I've got three children running around. It's fun isn't it? *S* Cynthia


Re: Relaxing (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:19:13 AM AEST
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thats gr8 as always :) !




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