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The Feeling
Contributed by
BEE
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Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 04:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The Feeling
Searching every part of my heart
not finding anything
not a soul in sight
No one to grab onto
Endless drop to the end
Twisting from side to side
Thoughts flowing threw my mind
Out my heart
From the sky
Nothing else
No one else
Time gone
Spirit fading
Life evaperating
Unforgetable
By Branden Goodrich
Copyright ©
BEE
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2007-07-04 04:28:53]
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Re: The Feeling
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by untitled on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:41:16 AM AEST
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| interesting...seems like a lullaby, then it slaps you, then stops. ^_^'' |
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Re: The Feeling
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:49:20 AM AEST
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I really liked this piece.. its very powerful and expressive with such little wording and a wonderous flow to it.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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