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When You Look At Me
Contributed by
bruce
on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 11:21:41 PM in AEST
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When You Look At Me
When you look at me
your eyes tell me so much
The look on your face
shows how you hunger, for my touch
This creates such a desire for me
to hold you in my arms
Just a little more magic
and one of your many charms
How lucky did I get
the day that I met you
This was very special
and I immediately knew
That I had found a love
as good as you could get
A day to remember
and never possibly forget
To spend the rest of my life with you
is now my greatest desire
This would make me, as happy as I could be
and in this life, all that I require
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-07-03 23:21:41]
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by Poess on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 01:42:56 AM AEST
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Why can't I find someone like you???
:)
Great poem. I love your writing style, simple yet completely effective. BEAUTIFUL writing! |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 02:57:27 AM AEST
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a very deep emotional dedicated write.. you can feel the love and devotion in this.. very well worded great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 04:22:44 PM AEST
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this is very precious writing.
Go bruce.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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absoluely beautiful
You sure know how to write about love
great job :) |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:35:04 AM AEST
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so beautiful and sweet!
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:52:56 AM AEST
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Innocently sincere and stunningly beautifu . . .
Ben |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:09:32 AM AEST
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Dear Bruce, this was a sensational "first" post to your immediately
following one. They go hand in hand as much as you and your
very lucky and special lady.
Truly remarkable to find someone that can hold our heart without
breaking it. I'm very happy that you seem to have done just that.
Beautiful, beautiful piece.
~Breezy : ) |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:13:16 AM AEST
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I can feel the desire and romance brewing within this write, woooooo hoooooooo a delightful and romantic piece you put down here to share with all of us once again!
Michelle |
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