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Circles
Contributed by
freemysoul13
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Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 07:04:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've ran in circles
For so many years
The same game everyday
A 'sorry' and a kiss
I am so sick of this
Wanted to change
Awhile ago
I don't know how to stand it
Will someone help me?
Its been awhile
Since I felt good
At home the screams are pain
In public the whispers hurt more
The wonder I felt at first
Before the pain and hurt
I want to get rid of you
Your spirit is haunting me
I need to live alone
Distance could be valued
Who I am won't allow this
Anymore
Circles are not the shape I want
My path is straight
I'm leaving you behind
Goodbye
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freemysoul13
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2007-07-03 19:04:21]
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Re: Circles
(User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 01:47:44 AM AEST
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I like this alot. It describes the pain some of us go through before deciding we're worth better. I think the ending lost a little momentum but not enough to hurt the poem.
Great job
I hope you're happier now...
I just left my man of 10 years after catching him cheating...and now the pain isn't there so much...and I think I AM happier then I've been in years. I feel like I'm worth something again.
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Re: Circles
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 04:44:47 PM AEST
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Welcome to the site.
Sometimes leaving is the best thing.
I live alone and it's the best way if you're not treated right.
Good work.
huggs,
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