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Pouring Rain
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 02:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You could see it moving in
like a great gray wall
traveling about across the way
Miles from town we are
and could see the wall approaching
closer and closer
Soon the water tower in town
shrouded... cloaked with a gray veil
of pouring rain
We watch patiently from our
perch on the great porch
Moving it was, across the fields
Crops must be loving this
Sweet nourishing moisture
Sent from Mother Earth
Listen closely children
Hear that sound?
Rain thundering down to the dry dirt
Soon it is here
Beautiful rain drenching all
The spray felt gently on our faces
Then the aroma...
My god there is nothing like
the smell of rain mixed with dirt
We sit and we enjoy
the sounds, the smells and the wonderful touch...
of the pouring rain.
6-28-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 03:35:34 PM AEST
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Lol i don't mind rain or even alittle bit of lightning and thunder but if theres a bad storm forget it lol i freak.
anyways good write as always
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 09:23:52 PM AEST
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| Loved it, great write |
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 03:00:58 AM AEST
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wow a very equiste write on the rain.. this gives one a feeling of being there in the storm listening and watching it.. great imagery.. beautiful job. your an awesome nature writer.
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 05:16:17 AM AEST
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I love the rain...storms...but even more than that, I love childrens take on nature. This reminded me of when my daughter & I were hiking & she told me this wonderful story of how creeks & rivers were formed a long time ago by the footprints of giants that filled w/ rain water.
Wonderous!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:39:09 AM AEST
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so sweet and refreshing, a special moment you will all treasure, so beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 11:45:53 PM AEST
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Oh my sis!!! WOW!
When I went to your page, and saw this title, I knew I HAD to read it,
but I was surprised with the content. I expected something very
different from the title ... how wonderfully serendipitous!!
I was there with you .. inside every description, I could feel the
breeze, smell the air, and actually taste the rain! Brilliant
job hun. I A D O R E this piece! Completely~
~Breezy |
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 06:02:38 PM AEST
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| What a well written poem, it was as if I was with you all sitting on the porch and patiently waiting to feel the spray from that rain and to smell the earthy smells. I am a sucker for nature and all that it stands for.Keep smiling from bern |
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Re: Pouring Rain
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by Dom on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:31:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful write hun, I love a good rainstorm! You have evoked so much in this poem, in my mind's eye I can see the rain coming, hear it falling, smell the fragrant damp wafting in the air.
Just brilliant! You know I love your nature writes!
Dom |
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