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Infected
Contributed by
a7x36
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Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 04:00:17 PM in AEST
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Time heals all wounds.
But this one's infected.
It's a stab wound to the gut.
Now it's all yellow with pus.
Disgusting.
Stiches?
Nah, I didn't go to the doctor.
Probably should though.
It might get worse.
Whatever, I'll wait it out.
Bad idea.
Now it's getting ugly.
I'll spare the details.
Doctor says I need surgery.
Something's lodged in there.
What? That makes no sense!
When did anything ever make sense.
Turns out it was a chip of bone.
Knife chipped it off my hip.
Realistic? No.
Cause this is all just a weird, awful dream.
Not really, but it should be.
Time heals all wounds.
Antibiotics help,
but some people can't afford them.
And there's no real precription
for a freak knifing to the side
where part of you hip gets
caught in the wound.
Ouch.
That hurt.
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a7x36
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Re: Infected
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
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It does make sense.
But like what is it about?
Anything hidden under?
What made you write it?
What gave you the inspiration or motivation to write it?
All these questions arose from reading this. :p
And I kind of unintentionally swapped a line for my own
I think it would flow
Doctor says I need surgery;
Something's lodged inside. |
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Re: Infected
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:36:42 AM AEST
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it was an interesting write.
I was thinking of onion death.
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