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Nothing But A Girl
Contributed by
Jazz
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You said I was someone special,
with a heart of finest gold.
You said you would be quite lucky,
to have someone like me to hold.
But you know nothing about me,
or the pain I have been through.
You look at the outer me,
and see what you want to.
You said I wear my heart on my sleeve,
and my soul is soft and sweet.
I wish you could see the tears,
that every night I weep.
I walk the nights as if a demon,
possessed by the devil of hell.
He beckoned me and we made a pact,
and I had only my soul to sell.
But you see something pure as heaven,
and an angel with silken wings.
And you see me as a dreamer,
pondering on the life's things.
So, you think you see something more?
You see a diamond amongst the pearls.
I'm sorry for having to tear down your walls,
but I am nothing but a girl.
Copyright ©
Jazz
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2003-03-01 13:00:00]
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Re: Nothing But A Girl
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by notsoangelic3000 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 01:19:37 PM AEST
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| Your statements are very clear in this poem, I like it very much because of that. When I read this, it reminds me of just the opposite with me. See I like these guyz, yet they only take me for a friend and I never know why exactly, but your point of view is very good, and now I think I know why. Thank you very much. |
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Re: Nothing But A Girl
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:56:08 PM AEST
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| This is a great write ... it flows well, and I like it's message. |
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Re: Nothing But A Girl
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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You had we hanging on every line. I love poems that do that.
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Re: Nothing But A Girl
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:20:21 AM AEST
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I love the fact that you seem to write truth in your poems,truth in it's finest writing,and you might consider yourself "nothing but a girl"but I would have to agree with the guy in this poem...You seem like a true pearl.Your writing is always nicely expressed and you seem to have the courage to fight back when you see something is wrong or you're being mistreated,and I admire you for that.I'm glad you don't take what you don't deserve !I really like every poem I read of you,I'm addicteddddddddddddddd!
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