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Momas boy
Contributed by
sinned
on
Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 11:55:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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A male child is born innocent helpless
A man child
A mother holds with tender kisses
A boy born to be hyper and wild
Wa wa a baby cries
A man child
A baby bottle and diaper dry
Dada first talking tries
Momma a later supprize
Delight with a boy this size
Worms bugs and butter flies
Toughtness comes by many a cry
Bang bang a cowboy lies
Wounded by and by
A shoulder wound never to die
Momma's boy
Daddy works,but Momma's there
A scraped knee for Mom to repair
With tender care
Years pass with wonder where
High school done
A war to be won
Terrorism is not a man
Three thousand as towers cave in
God accepts three thousand souls
Time takes another three thousand or so
Mama's boy joins with Sally John and Joe
G I's Goverment issue
Wars and rummers go on and on
Dark clouds don't always bring rain
Blown sand covers the sun
Humvee's bake in a desert oven
Down a sandy road
Moma's boy Sally and John and Joe
Eyes watching to and fro
O'mygod a flash of red
Fire and blood on desert sand
A far away land
Suddenly dead Sally Joe and John
Momma's boy lies in hot sand
Daddy's proud of good son
Momma's boy life seeping into the sand
Never understanding this desert land
Momma momma cries a dieing son
Sinned
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2007-07-01 23:55:20]
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Re: Momas boy
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by needledancing on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 03:50:17 AM AEST
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| A very powerful and touching piece. Good impact with your final stanza..thank you. |
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Re: Momas boy
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 05:46:33 AM AEST
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a very intense powerful write.. the ending is so sad though but very right atcha .. this is a very powerful sad piece.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Momas boy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 09:44:48 AM AEST
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Sinned, your beautiful work never ceases to amaze me. The rythem of this poem took me deeper into the theme and beautifuly structured stanzas, you knew exactly how this write would turn out before it was on paper. It tells a sad story that I became very attached to while reading. Wonderful job.
As always,
Keep writing
Keep smiling
sweetstranger |
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