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A Breath Taking View
Contributed by
bruce
on
Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 08:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A Breath Taking View
A breath taking view, is just what I see
when I am looking right at you
You cannot imagine, the feelings that arise
by the things you say and what you do
I become completely mesmerized
totally, at your beck and call
Whatever is needed by you
no matter how large or small
You are a very special lady
with a heart of gold
Truly a wonder, in this world
and what a sight to behold
A thrill in itself, just to be near you
in your arms, sets me on fire
As I look into your eyes
what is created, a burning desire
I love you, I love You
is all that's on my mind
A wondrous treasure
with everything combined
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-07-01 20:33:45]
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Re: A Breath Taking View
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by needledancing on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 03:54:18 AM AEST
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| It is wonderful to read the glory of a heart filled with love. Wonderful job.Never get tired of love poems. |
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Re: A Breath Taking View
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by Poess on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 10:35:24 AM AEST
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What a great love poem.
I would love to have someone who cared enough about me to put it into a loving poem.
I'm sure she loved it.
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Re: A Breath Taking View
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:14:57 AM AEST
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Once again........ this poem takes the readers breath away. May your union you smiled upon by the love gods each and every day.
Michelle |
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Re: A Breath Taking View
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 10:02:19 PM AEST
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| Another great write! |
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