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Last Stand Before Tomorrows
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 10:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Last stand before tomorrows
Mountains cross over path
Climb or lay down forever
Beneath the lush green grass
Solitary must be the journey
Looking past this reality
Deep to center of turmoil
Must find the real me
Countless the attempts
Fortress of great magnitude
Weighing each decision
Setting myself up to lose
This time I must find
The secret that shackles my success
And armed with key of determination
Self-defeating behavior undress
Last stand before tomorrows
Last chance to make a change
Alone I must travel this road
Alone my life I will rearrange
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2007-06-29 22:12:12]
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Re: Last Stand Before Tomorrows
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 01:45:10 AM AEST
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awww HUgs Shari tight
You ok?you ever to talk let me know i will be here for you. |
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Re: Last Stand Before Tomorrows
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by asleep-before-dawn on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 08:40:02 AM AEST
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| This is deep.Sounds like a problem with self. Why travel alone though?? |
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Re: Last Stand Before Tomorrows
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by asleep-before-dawn on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 08:58:26 AM AEST
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I for some reason picture you with a terminator suit on out to face the bad man by yourself, take on the world...
Now being serious.......
I came down on you way to hard last night and I am sorry. It was out of concern but it is your life and your business and from now on I keep my opinions to myself and my mouth shut , that is a promise.
Best wishes to you with this Shari and I mean that, I love you with all my heart and again I am very very sorry.
~Huggers~
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Last Stand Before Tomorrows
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 02:04:08 AM AEST
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Very touching write....your struggles I felt. *hugs you tight*
Peace,
Laura |
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