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Seven More .....
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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"Seven more" ..... those forget-me-nots words,
that soft sound from your dying lips,
They echo within me, you know,
"I still owe you a dinner",
I remember you spoke that clear,
Oh' I remember thats how much you touched me,
Love combined for eternity, I remember that pack,
both of us, You go, I go,
How come I still have seven though,
these days are long without you,
Winter so cold and brutal,
but at your grave, I stand,
Nathan excused himself,
he had to pee",
funny thing he still remembers that,
You're probably laughing,
You taught him that, you know,
just like the whistle's at the resturants,
so the pretty waitress would come back,
what a card you were,
"This is how you get their attention"
but you didn't need a thing,
I have such wonderful memories of you,
but yet I cry,
I loved you through it all,
you are so very missed,
You looked like an angel with the blanket I made,
that picture hangs on my wall,
framed with the word 'Love'
"Seven more" ..... I remember those words,
I'm still holding on,
but it still hurts, really bad,
I lost a great part of me that day,
without you I'm so sad!
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Valerie_Pearson
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2003-03-01 11:00:00]
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Re: Seven More .....
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by Nessiecat on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:18:26 AM AEST
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Valerie,
I read your poem and couldn't think of what to put in the comments box because I couldn't find the words. Your poem is so touching.
Anyway, the next thing I know, an email came into my box and it's a poem by someone else. I think their words say it all. I'll PM you with it.
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Re: Seven More .....
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:52:03 PM AEST
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| I'm not looking forward to that day ... you have written about it so personally and painfully - like most of your poems Valerie they drip with emotion. ... Take care Jan |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:42:15 PM AEST
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| Dear Valerie, The kind of beautiful that makes me cry. My father died young and I'm now a great-grandma, but I still have times that I cry for him. This is one of them. Love you, Bizzy |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:48:52 AM AEST
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Val,another sad & touching write,My heart goes out to you! I still dont know where you get your strength maybe from him!
I know this pain I still miss my mom!
God Bless Christina |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 07:58:28 AM AEST
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| awwww huggs and lotsa love valerie, he sounds like a great man, and meant so much and taught, and was there for nathan in special ways too, love ya, nessa |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 03:57:34 PM AEST
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| this is so beautifully sad... blessings in remembering your yesteryears and writing your love and pain out... |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 10:55:53 PM AEST
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| A wonderful tribute to your love . A wonderful memorial |
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Re: Seven More .....
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST
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| Awww Valerie, I have tears in my eyes. I am so very sorry for your loss. I have missed reading your poetry. This write touched me deeply. *S* Cynthia |
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