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Trapped

Contributed by Poess on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 10:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



my existance seems so pointless, so hopeless and lonely
I know them not to be truths, no matter what they've told me
honesty must be too difficult, for your every word is laced with lies
my mind strewn with heartache, tears and my sorrowful cries
Each sentence that falls from your tongue is manipulating
every day I silently sit, painfully waiting
to trust again, to feel secure, to feel comforted and understood,
these things everyone needs, only few have, but everyone should
why does it seem that my heart has built an impenatrable wall
and my mind climbs painfully to the top, only to fall
back to the isolation below, the despair that traps my very soul
the seeping sadness that has overtaken my life and taken a toll
on my sanity and everything that makes me who you once knew
I am no longer happy in life, little things or anything I do
my mind is occupied continuously, reliving my past
thinking of times when you lied, hurt and put me last
the people in my life don't truly love me or care
it's simply more convinient for me to be there
things have to change or I cannot survive
In the dark my soul cannot possibly thrive
When I was young I thought I was meant for so much more
how can I doubt my self worth, my being, my very core?
Living this way has made me question myself
not care about consequences, the future or my health
I'm dying a little more with every breath I take
soon I'll be gone, when there is no more desire to wake
my heart withered and broken, my body a torturous cell
someday I'll be free, and in the wind is where I'll dwell,
no more pain, no more lies, no more solitude, no more sorrow
just the pleasuring thought that, at last, there is no tomorrow




Copyright © Poess ... [ 2007-06-29 10:06:53]
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Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 12:21:07 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing. I know the feelings well but life goes on.
That's why I'm single.
Hang tuff.
huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST
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I had tears in my eyes after reading this, you express so much pain. I particularly liked the image of the 'impenatrable wall'.

Take care, you will be in my thoughts,
Dom


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 09:34:44 AM AEST
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this is very powerful stuff

*hugs*

i know exactly how you feel x x


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by Amicus on Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 03:35:45 AM AEST
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I enjoy sad poems. this is very well written. it has the flow of real feelings. i particularly enjoyed

I'm dying a little more with every breath I take
soon I'll be gone, when there is no more desire to wake

and the last line. though everything seems lost, you will find yourself again

Your Amicus


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 02:16:05 AM AEST
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Another excellent write, my friend. Very touching.
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by Grownbabygirl on Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 04:27:30 AM AEST
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This was very deep and i'm so sorry for your pain but hopefully very soon, your heart and your mind can float once again on one accord. I know it is simple to say than to put into action but you have two choices, either leave or forgive. Once you make your mind up, stick w/ it, be the best at whatever you decide, keep positive thought coming and God bless you.


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 12:25:57 AM AEST
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Sorry 4 your pain angain hope it's ok to comment on your work, it's real and very sincere in it's emotions. Keep up the great work.


Ben


Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:04:39 AM AEST
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well this will now allow you to explore yourself and get a more out going look. sorry for the one who ripped your heart , but i have been told things happen for reasons.i know all so clear on heart breaks, im not with anyone yet the heart has still being broken and torn.


endless




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