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My Lost child
Contributed by
Ju1cy
on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 09:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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U try'd to stay strong,
and fight the game,
u heald on tight,
throughout the pain,
Ur life was short lived,
not even a breath did you take,
i gave you life,
but you did not wake,
that day i lost an angel,
but God found one in you,
he looked down and said its time to fly ,
and thats when i said goodbye my boo,
I miss you dearly ,
and i wonder why ,
God chose you,
to go up high,
My unborn child,
Many nights i've cried,
and wished...
...for you to be by my side,
Tears on my pillow,
Cry's in the night,
i feel so empty,
but i will fight,
The truma i face,
the baby i lost,
i guess its true,
happiness comes with a cost,
The footprints you left apon my heart,
Like open wounds that i can feel,
will not shut and will not heal,
Ino that soon,
i'll see you again,
to see your smile,
that will relieve my pain,
One day Daddy and i,
will be with you up in the sky,
ill wrap my arms around you,
and that will the last time i ever say GOOD BYE.
Copyright ©
Ju1cy
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2007-06-29 09:22:05]
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Re: My Lost child
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by Poess on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 10:08:58 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss!
Great, heartfelt poem. I loved it. It almost made me cry. |
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Re: My Lost child
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 12:38:35 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
I know the feelings tho 'cause I lost twins once. I now have three grown children grown with their own families.
Luvm huggs, prayer,
emy
I am so sorry for your loss. |
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Re: My Lost child
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:04:29 PM AEST
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The feeling of loss is felt from beginning to end, I am truly sorry for your loss young lady. You have written this poem from your heart which makes for an excellent write.
May you once again have peace and joy fill your heart young lady.
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