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***VODKA***
Contributed by
Davinah
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:55:49 AM in AEST
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Vodka on the rocks
and a whole lot of complications
the ice cubes tingle as I swallow down my pain.
Doused in vodka with an unclear view on this world.
I swim through my hopelessness,
dancing to the tune of my hidden rage.
The hope for love, crushed again.
another scar on my heart.
another hole in my soul
you could see right through by now.
If there is anything left for me it will soon disappear
as did my trust and faith with every waking hour spent in confusion;
The grayness of existence, the rules
the players, the cards, I lost…
the mockery, the maze, the vicious circle
How many years have I got left of this?
I know no loneliness
I am my own worst friend
It's just a downward spiral of self-abuse.
Pour another drink and erase my mind.
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2007-06-27 10:55:49]
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Re: ***VODKA***
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:51:58 PM AEST
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Oooooo Excellent write here. My god, I shall just say that OMFG have I been here. Long ago. Your last stanza was like hitting the nail on the head. I feel your pain.
Peace,
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Re: ***VODKA***
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 02:40:21 PM AEST
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| lol nice very nice |
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