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one day i have to die
Contributed by
veenu
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:02:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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life is the starting of the end,
a long lasting continuing trend,
here some born,where theygone,
here some won,where they drown ;
while speaking about,
a speachless sound...............
i never thought i will die,
i never want to understand that the next day is mine;
while watching the wrinkled faces,
those holding there traces,
i collect my memories,
i entered in to the world of note-books,
rearranged my words,
and display all the colours which my pen shades.............
yet my words brilliant and bright ,
but not ment for my eye,
cause i dont want to know ,
that one day i have to die.....
i have to die...............
Copyright ©
veenu
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2007-06-27 17:02:55]
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Re: one day i have to die
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:51:46 AM AEST
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i think that this is brilliant. i really like it, especially where you've written
''life is the starting of the end,
a long lasting continuing trend''
and
''i collect my memories,
i entered in to the world of note-books''
it's really good.
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Re: one day i have to die
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by Poess on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:10:18 PM AEST
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I really liked this. Very nicely written. It gives me the same feeling as that song "fifteen for a moment" or whatever it is. It makes me think of how life seems so long sometimes and yet even at 26 I look back at when I was a little girl and it feels like it went by in a heartbeat.
Moving poetry. :)
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Re: one day i have to die
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by shelby on
Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 01:32:22 PM AEST
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something we all think of at times......
I loved the entire write but the third stanza is incredible
Michelle |
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