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You Leave a Trail of Toughts
Contributed by
greenbird
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 04:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When you are not right here beside me,
I look to other things.
The can tab from the day that you first heard me sing.
The poem that I cherish,
that you wrote for me in Spanish.
That email that sent,
before our troubles caught the wind.
That penguin that you gave me
that Christmas long ago.
The voice mail that you left,
to only say hello.
The plane ticket that we passed and wrote
our little, private, coded notes
we had to pass from friend to friend
to get the note between our hands.
I think back to the little things,
the hidden words and their meanings,
the symbols only we can tell
that throw others off of our trail.
The songs that only we can know
have hidden secrets of highs and lows.
When you're not here
I walk and fail
but all's not lost,
you leave a trail.
A trail of all our sacred things
that keeps you here
till you are what
the morning brings.
Copyright ©
greenbird
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2007-06-27 16:10:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Leave a Trail of Toughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:07:19 PM AEST (User
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a very delightful write.. simply lovely and gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside .. great job
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Re: You Leave a Trail of Toughts
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 03:57:49 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this write, heart and soul entire write is beautiful but I so loved this line
A trail of our sacred things...... AWESOME~
Michelle |
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