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The Slither . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:57:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Imagine something devouring you from the inside out, something feelingless so that it can only appreciate by using your sences. Only what is pain to you is would be the equivelant of orgazmic pleasure to it, and it's appetite is stimulated by your vibrations an aphrodeziac if you will, with it's hunger growing more veracious as you scream that is of course untill you can scream no more but not to worry, cause then it's you who'll feel it's vibrations as it digest you whole and still alive inside of it's system, enjoy your journey my friend, you've certainly earned it . . .
A
grim
nocturnal episode
goes on inside of
you,
trust not thyself to slumber
for you know what it can
do.
Laboriously night after night
into the morning sun,
fear not for you and the slither
shall soon entwine as
one.
Every moment your alive
to death you'll closer be, for to a slither's taste buds
your quite a delicacy.
feel the slither breathing
as it pulsate's in your spine, the way it feel's you screaming
as it sip's your blood like wine.
Slowly squirming in your guts as you toss and turn
excreting into all your ruts
as your intestines
burn.
With no escape
still you must lie within your bed
wishing you could die,
louder grow's it slurping sound into your throat
the slither's
bound.
Ripping you from inside out
from life you'll now depart, as the slither
sucks you through it's mouth you can feel it's beating
heart.
Ferociously you struggle
as you fight for every breath,
knowing that it's pointless
as you slowly
meet your
death.
The slither
has you in it's grip
you've lost all your control
into it's pit of bile you slip
it's swallowing you
whole.
To no availe you try and scream
inside it's walls of slime, perhaps it's all
a horrid dream and you'll wake up
in
time.
But screaming only make's the slither
hunger for you more, it's over now as you lie dead
amidst the slither's
core.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:05:18 PM AEST
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Jeepers Ben you gave me the creepers with this...... Dark and sinfully wicked wooooooo Michelle who is now peeking for slithering things lol.
Good walk on the dark side my friend
Michelle |
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:11:58 PM AEST
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Well now....here lies the alpha and omega to be all and do all..our Ben has travelled to the dark side and oh oh how good does this feel...oh my goodness he is sure to get a ghostalarm on this one....yep...I'm sure of it.
They will make him one of the many and he will be lost to us. No more love poems.....just the dark side. Love it Ben......awesome, couragous and look out here come the ghostalarms.............lol |
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:23:55 PM AEST
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I don't think I've ever read one of your writes that can match this for creepiness, the descriptions are so vivid and unsettling.
Dark indeed!
Dom |
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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a stunning exquiste dark enchanting piece of work here.. I love this write.. its so dark and errie great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:31:22 PM AEST
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Wow, Ben I would not want to meet that slither....damn I just might have before, though. Beastly thing that devours insides.
This piece rocked, my brother....it had me hanging on each word. What a good tale you wove here.
Glad I read this in the daylight hours.
Peace,
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 03:35:42 PM AEST
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Well ben,
I don't really get into the dark stuff but it's well written.
huggs,
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Re: The Slither . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 09:33:15 AM AEST
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yuesh!
reminds me of what a weasel once did to one of our rabbits... we went in the morning to feed them and he was 'deflated'
love n' hugs nessa |
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