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Years Ago
Contributed by
Tamareesperes
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:40:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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shadows a skewed, falling upon curtains in wait.
Empty perfume bottles and flowers hung,
this old room brings nostalgia.
A place I was so long ago,
detachment is no option.
Apart of me it is still,
I am here now years ago.
lying in wait thinking of being
somewhere else, but i think
as I am here a time before, theres no
place I'd rather be.
This room is you, mysterious and empty.
years ago........Now you've changed and I'm away.
I cant cross a mirror that reflects my mistakes.
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Tamareesperes
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2007-06-27 12:40:24]
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Re: Years Ago
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by ghostwhisper on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 11:01:39 AM AEST
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detachment is no option, good line. Poem flowed with gathering speed and thought.
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Re: Years Ago
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 04:22:17 PM AEST
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A beautiful write,
the very last line I cant cross a mirror that reflects my mistakes..Powerful
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