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Love_impossible
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
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I was but a meare child when we first met
5 or 6, maybe
Mom brought you home and it was then when I couldn't help
but to fall in love with you...or was it lust?
I never really cared at that age,
but I grew up and you never even noticed me.
At least not the me I wanted you to see
And on that late night on the other side of mom's door,
you gave me my first kiss and a memory that will never fade
From then on, you drove me crazy
but then you disapeared for what seemed to be an eternity
4 years later mom brought you home again
I had feelings for you,
but had to repress them.
until we kissed again
and you're driving me crazy once more...
I just want to hold you tight
to fall asleep with you in my arms....
I just want you........
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:34:27 AM AEST
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| Wow thats a tough one do they have the same feelings for you? My grandparents were 10 years apart from one another so I wont say that it wont work! They were married till their dying day! So all I would have to say is be careful & good luck! Christina |
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by Love_impossible on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:09:35 AM AEST
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I gotta say, my parents were also 10 years apart and are now divorced...I just hope I don't get hurt too bad....But she does say she feels the same way.
Thanks for the comment! |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:22:02 AM AEST
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Love isn't impossible.... this is s tough situation to be in..but it isn't wrong... you just have to tread the waters carefully.... and maybe wait a while...see what happens....
Nice write tho....
Jenni |
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by Love_impossible on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:28:57 AM AEST
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| By the way...the title was supposed to be "Mom's best friend". And just to let you know that I am not very good with words, so my poetry may not be so good sometimes... |
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:24:33 AM AEST
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| i say good luck!!! my folks are 15 years apart, and my dad was my grandma's (on my mums side) friend!! |
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