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Indignation
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 09:48:14 AM in AEST
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Indignation -
Even the sound
of the word
Sparks-
Attitude
(Whether righteous or NOT)
It comes swiftly,
blazing through out
hearts and veins
Or as persistant
as a pulse
Pounding again and again
Until....
Acknowledged
Indignation -
a raising
of one's head
a spark in the
narrowing eyes
Squaring of shoulders
an impatient intake
of breath
You have gotten
my attention
Now -, let's talk......
Carol S. or for some of you...Coral
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2007-06-27 09:48:14]
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Re: Indignation
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:29:43 PM AEST
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Carol,
It has been way too long. How are you, sister? Missed your writes, but I know you've been busy.
This is a great way to come back, cause you've gotten my attention. *smiles*
Love that ending....
"Now-, let's talk"
Good to "see" you,
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Indignation
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:31:47 PM AEST
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(hee hee..... Hi Coral!)
Laura's right, of course... it's been too long! I do so hope that you've been well. Hope you're blazing down that highway that we talked about a while ago (I'm either lingering on the shoulder or cruising at light speed - oddly enough, it's hard to tell which at times).
This piece has a punch. Indignation. You're right - the word itself says plenty. As do the other words you've placed on the page with it.
Glad to see you posting again!
Take Care,
~Snemmy |
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Re: Indignation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 05:52:42 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really refreshing!
It's like shaking something off and bringing your full attention to bear on someone....if that makes sense..lol
Glad to see you back here!!! |
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