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OUCH!
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 03:43:01 AM in AEST
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While my dad was using a saw, his hand slipped.
It cut off two of his fingertips.
I thought his days of using that saw were at an end.
But a short time later he started using that saw again.
It took courage to use that saw again after what he went through.
If you use dangerous machinery, please be careful or something similar might happen to you.
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randyjohnson
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Re: OUCH!
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:32:56 AM AEST
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sorry about your dad man...OUCH
Fair play to him for using the saw again
nice honest write
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Re: OUCH!
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 07:50:28 AM AEST
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Randy, Randy....So sorry about your father. I could not help but thinking when I read this....how cool if you would put this in a format such as a children's book. What a wise lesson and given in such a way that even a child can well relate. I just pictured it with illustrations and all. Sometimes you can be a bit strange Randy, (so am I my friend), but this was a decent piece.
Peace,
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Re: OUCH!
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 09:43:22 AM AEST
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you took a sad situation and gave a strong lesson here
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Re: OUCH!
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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OUCH is right sorry to hear this news...
I do agree with Laura is a good learnin tool as well. Here is a special word hoping saws are kind to the finger from here on out
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