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My Heart
Contributed by
The_Forgotten16
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:32:07 AM in AEST
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Theres a hole in my heart where you should be
Where you should be here with me
Here with me by my side telling me that you love me
and will never hurt me
Telling me you will never hurt me
like the “Demon” did.
The “demon” hurt me in a way
That cant be repaired.
Cant be repaired until
I forget that horrible
The horrible night that I will never
It linger on in my mind forever.
All the unanswered questions
I still have.
The unanswered question
I still haven’t asked.
All the unanswered question all
Lead up to one simple question
WHY??
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The_Forgotten16
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2007-06-27 02:32:07]
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Re: My Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:59:14 AM AEST
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welcome to the site.. this is a very powerful expressive piece and i really liked the ending.. its very emotionally felt. great job
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Re: My Heart
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:14:05 AM AEST
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good flow
well done |
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Re: My Heart
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by BigDre on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 02:08:48 AM AEST
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| By Reading this poem I could feel the whole in your heart, the anger from being hurt, and the searching for the answer to the "why?" Question. |
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Re: My Heart
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by BigDre on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 02:08:53 AM AEST
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| By Reading this poem I could feel the whole in your heart, the anger from being hurt, and the searching for the answer to the "why?" Question. |
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