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The Unknown
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deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 03:02:04 PM in AEST
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Are you breathing
Do you inhale and exhale as I do
oxygen...carbon dioxide exchange
Or are you walking without soul?
Do you see your reflection mirrored
Lines on your face
Can you touch gently what you see
Have you grown too old?
Bleeding eyes no longer see
trails of indignant ones
Is your skin so tough
Has everything grown cold?
World is askew
Time aches as it ticks slowly on
I watch and wait...lonely
Just listening to what I'm told
6-25-07
Laura Horner
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Re: The Unknown
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 03:29:30 PM AEST
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wow Laura whats up with you now days.
Is there anything i can do for you?
Take care i will be praying for you sis.
hugs
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Re: The Unknown
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 05:27:08 PM AEST
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| Lovely write makes you really think about your life. |
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:43:26 AM AEST
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wow this is simply amazing.. it makes you wonder about things and the world. its very sad though but beautifullly written great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Unknown
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 06:15:38 AM AEST
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whoa sis this is tough....
Hugs
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Re: The Unknown
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 09:29:03 AM AEST
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hey this is really thougt provoking piece which really makes a person consider there life and others,,,i hope that everything in your life works out for the good...because they way you express it is brilliant,,,
OH and thakns so much for the commentst on my poem earlier it means so much to me...
Stay strong
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:23:44 AM AEST
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hmm
this is a thought provoking flow
well done |
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Re: The Unknown
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:19:08 PM AEST
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| this is very good! compassion, kindness, and wisdom do not always come with time..Vincent |
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Re: The Unknown
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:03:44 PM AEST
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Ah, yes... sounds like one of those moments that you just want to take someone by the shoulders, give them a good shake, look them in the eye and holler "what the hell is going on in there?". I've had a few of those myself. And, of course, I suppose any of us could take that approach... but it is, I think anyway, sometimes a scary question to ask. To be honest... I've no idea whether it is or is not the best course of action. Seriously, I don't have a clue there. I know one thing though... most, if not all, of us would probably agree that it would sure be lovely if an inclination to take such an approach was eliminated by our knowing, already, the answer.
The questions here echo a need-to-know'edness. And geesh... seem stuffed with so very much. I do so hope that the answers come, regardless of what prompts them to.
*hugs you*
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Re: The Unknown
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:03:59 PM AEST
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And unfortunately one cannot always believe what they hear when from those who tell them but what they want to hear. a beautiful write and so powerful and yet sad and touching. always a gentle healing heart you posess and may it know the same in return my sister.
thank u also 4 your comment . . .
((((peace 2u always My Sister Laura))))
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Re: The Unknown
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by thisismesodeal on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 10:22:23 AM AEST
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wonderful write. It flows nicely.
Overall a great poem. |
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Re: The Unknown
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 06:58:50 PM AEST
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These are words that bare heavy thought. Lost and afraid. I hope writing help ease the pain you write about today.
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