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HEART ACHE
Contributed by
Lozbi
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Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 01:13:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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my heart is torn
my heart is broken
why did you have to
rip it open
my eyes are swollen
my face is wet
it's all your fault
that i'm so upset
i tried to remember
the happy times
but the little fights and arguments
just crept back into my mind
the smile you seen
i'm afraid to say
it wasn't even real
just a fake to cover up my pain
it hurts to think about
how we could be
my dear friend,
how could you do this to me....
By Loren McCormack
Copyright ©
Lozbi
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2007-06-26 13:13:22]
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Re: HEART ACHE
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 04:43:45 PM AEST
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wow sounds like you got hurt pretty bad .
you did great on the poem
take care |
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Re: HEART ACHE
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:22:36 AM AEST
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this is a very expressive sad write.. it is terrible when someone you trust betrays you.. great expression here
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