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moving on
Contributed by
rizer
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Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 04:34:27 AM in AEST
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Moving on is hard to do
when all my life I wanted you.
Your answer was silent but cold, shattering my heart that I thought was solid as gold.
I stand with my only friend named lonliness, accepting its dark, bitter, sour kiss.
So much pain, so hard to bear. My body's gone numb in such great despair.
I tried to forget you, but my memories don't. I tried to hate you, but my broken heart won't.
I guess I'll watch from afar, you never noticing my falling star.
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rizer
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2007-06-26 04:34:27]
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Re: moving on
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by Thespia on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 06:43:21 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem, I know how that feels. Lol, im still trying to accept the fact that i have to move on, i havent reached the part where i try and pull my life back together! But this poem spoke deeply to me of emotions i cant seem to express. Thank you for writing and sharing it. |
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Re: moving on
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 11:25:03 AM AEST
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this is very expressive and full of feeling.. great job in this small piece of poetry .. well done
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: moving on
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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I find exception in your author's note, poet. The truth is, I
fear, it's not just sometimes hard to move on, but ever and
always, methinks. Even when we know it's for the best; even
when we can see (oh GOD! we can see), the future will be
much brighter from here; even when we make that most
painful and difficult decision ourself. Yes ... much pain
and despondency within your words .... but there is a
bright side. You have written out your emotion and in
doing so have at least processed some of that anguish.
There are no easy answers .. we learn by doing
and we just keep on doing. :) Hoping each day
gets better and easier for you ...
(good luck)
~Breezy |
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Re: moving on
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by brew on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:56:48 PM AEST
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Many cant move on.many cant not stop.but there many reasons in ones" life why they .cant. For one who falls.."in love" its hard to continue, yet, if ALL isnt a part of that.Why hang on?!?! Yes, we have to move, yet sometimes its for other reasons....
I hope you find a reason to hang, or set free.which ever is suitable for thyself. Just member do it for your happiness, and not for another.....never settle
Brew~ |
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Re: moving on
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 05:38:03 PM AEST
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| Sad for you but a beautiful write the words are very touching. |
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Re: moving on
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by madhusudan on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:12:13 AM AEST
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| Its just not easy, oh not easy at all to move on...im trudgin along one day at a time...but im tryin not to look back to the past....else i will be turning my back to the future |
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Re: moving on
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:08:38 PM AEST
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| ya its hard to move alone, while others smiling..............................good write keep on writing |
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