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Peace
Contributed by
Dom
on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 11:58:27 PM in AEST
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To see a single petal
Floating gently to the ground,
Cupped in Wind’s protective hand.
To hear the lazy shushing Summer’s waves
As they tumble pebbles over
In their eternal cycles.
To smell the air after rain;
So fresh, this cleansed earth
Renewed in life.
To feel cool water clothe my skin,
Its shapeless, liquid blanket
Soothes the harm.
To taste the tang of memory
That returns you to your
Younger, carefree world.
To believe there is much more
Joy, much more hope
Still left to find in this world,
From this day, tomorrow,
After
Copyright ©
Dom
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2007-06-25 23:58:27]
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Re: Peace
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:25:03 AM AEST
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indeed peaceful and so very comforting
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Re: Peace
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 02:19:47 AM AEST
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Yep, i'm sticking with my first instinct, a top
notch poet 2 b sure. this is refreshing and you
have a style to boot and i like the variety you
bring to your writting. Very nice Dom.
Ben |
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Re: Peace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 02:33:07 AM AEST
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My friend, this is so lovingly beautiful, softly comforting and
delightfully lifting. Wow. I was on the beach in my mind while
reading this. I could smell the salty air, feel the sun's rays,
and the spray of ocean's breath; I could hear the waves
crash to shore ... it was all so splendid. A delight for all
the senses and an absolute serene feeling.
Wonderful write, Dom. So completely beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Peace
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by brew on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 01:03:12 PM AEST
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Makes you close your eyes, and visulize...calmness.the beach...! The wind and spray of waves, crashing the rocks and taking one to deep and smooth thoughts......YOU made my nite with this write....I love peace, and lately its been hard to have....THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart
Brew~ |
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Re: Peace
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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My friend, you made me dance within my heart with smooth comfort of hope... and felt that it is not over... not yet.
A Very nice and reassuring poem.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Peace
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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Simply a delightful read. It was easy for me to see these beautiful things in my minds' eye. Peace is so good. *smiles*
Peace to you,
Laura |
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Re: Peace
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 05:40:21 PM AEST
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| A truly great write.really got to me |
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Re: Peace
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by workingharleylady on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 11:18:47 PM AEST
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| Honestly this has got to be in the very top 5 of the most beautiful and imagery filled, loaded to the gills poems that i have had the privelege to be a part of. I'm only jealous that i did'nt write it myself(jk). I will be following you as well my friend. You have magic in your pen. Warmly, Chrissy |
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Re: Peace
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 04:52:08 PM AEST
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Beauteous, delicate & so very complete feeling.
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme |
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Re: Peace
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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| A heart stopping peace that should be read each day ones feet hit the floor. The day would be filled with awareness and the gratitude of being a part of the everything of life. You show with this piece....your inner peace and it is beautiful indeed. |
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Re: Peace
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 05:24:36 PM AEST
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Oh the beautiful tranquil feeling I got while I read this. I closed my eyes , a serene feeling swept over me while your wonderfully penned words took me miles away. Simply beautiful Dom~ thanks for sharing your fabulous poetry with us~
*warm hugs*
dreamer |
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