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Eternal
Contributed by
kathy
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I die and return to the ground,
never doubt that my soul will forever be around.
If you concentrate you'll feel me by your side.
I'll be there when you shed a tear,
Your deepest fears I will hear.
You may not see me in the physical way,
But I'll return everytime you call my name.
So don't be depressed if my face you can't see,
For my soul is an eternal part of me.
Copyright ©
kathy
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2003-03-01 06:30:00]
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Re: Eternal
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:57:09 AM AEST
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So sad but nicely done!
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Re: Eternal
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:55:30 PM AEST
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beautifully written our loved ones are always by our side on the eternal plain
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Re: Eternal
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:05:39 AM AEST
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| welcome to the site Kathy, beautiful written prose, a great way to express eternity, love this one, keep sharing |
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Re: Eternal
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by kathy on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 07:23:21 PM AEST
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| Thank-you for you comment and welcome Valerie. I am enjoying reading and sharing poetry offered on this site. |
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