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Contributed by fadingaway on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 04:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I used to have all the right words,
All at just the right time,
I gave you kisses when you wanted them,
And hugs when you'd cry,
Now I feel like I should die,

I miss the way you were,
Your hair and your eye's,
Your intoxicating smile and laugh,
You were like an angel in that moment,
Suspended in time when we kissed in the rain,

Your friends and family,
I knew were always there,
I'd do anything you see,
Just to give you a little more of me,
"Just to see you smile"("You're better than me")

I used to have all the answers,
And now it's killing me like a cancer,
Take my knife and show me what I'm living for,
There's nothing I wouldn't do for the answer,
I took it all for granted when you said. "I love you"

Why can't it be, you and me,
Im still looking for the answer,
It's slowly killing me like a cancer,
I have to live with what I did,
And it's slowly killing me like a cancer,

Why can't I just give in,
Accept what everybody thinks,
Im still looking for the answer,
Looking for the cure,
To my cancer, I miss all that you are,

"You're better than me"
I don't know if I am,
I lost you,
I don' think that I am,
"You're better than me"

I'll give back all that I've taken,
Just to see you smile,
"I don't know what to do"
I say a simlpe"I love you"
"I hope it speaks that volume that I feel"

You see you're the one who's "Better than me"
I don't know how it's going to end,
So take my knife and show me what I'm living for,
There's nothing I won't do for the answer,
I am my own cancer,

These words speak of romance poet,
I wish they were of me,
But you see I know these word's,
Were ment for someone better,
Someone " Better than Me".







Copyright © fadingaway ... [ 2007-06-25 16:23:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 09:55:55 AM AEST
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wow this is so passionate and sad.. its such an expressive powerful write.. I really liked this poem.. wonderful job.. I loved the wording and the flow of it .. keep writing

Vampyress Jenni


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by shelby on Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 04:12:54 PM AEST
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Heart and soul into this write I am deeply moved. If I feel it that is one thing that makes me love it this is good

Michelle


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by Former_Member on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 05:55:21 AM AEST
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SO glad to see you finally posted this. you are a truly amazing writer. keep up the terrific work!

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