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Love's Creation . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
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Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:19:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are of
love's creation
made up of pure affection,
in the mirror of love even venus above
would pale next to your
reflection.
You are of
love's creation
born of an angel's eye,
you were designed with me in mind
to love you untill i
die.
How can my heart
help these feelings? when my eyes
are so filled with you,
because of those kisses
your now my misses without you
what would i
do.
You are of
love's creation
the seed in my garden of life,
my flower of choice said my hearts voice
to blossom one day as my
wife.
Ben
((((a pleasant week end to all))))
btw if u don't receive a thank u blame it on a
malfuntction of the site lol. to those of u who's
e-mail i do have u can certainly count on a reply
along with my reading of your work as always.
thank you
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: Love's Creation . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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| Wonderful job. Smooth and flowing full of love as is that heart of yours.I love the "my flower of choice said my hearts voice".Very clever. |
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Re: Love's Creation . . . Ben
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:44:01 PM AEST
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Of course Ben.. I'd understand completely, if you were to deny me any blessing or confidence regarding your intentions, mentioned in your closing.. as well as any other likewise reciprocations, my friend~
(and fully understood.. for the most obvious of reasons..)
I've been away for a while-
though, just as anyone who's had the pleasure of reading you again and again would concur,
you've continued to express, with the greatest confidence, your utter and unwavering,
albeit: 'absolute' devotion to the written word-
..redefining, Love at every stroke of the key through an almost, unbearable display of beauty and confidence~
Yours truly.. as before,
B
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Re: Love's Creation . . . Ben
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by hisprettygirl on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 08:01:50 AM AEST
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so tender and sweet. simple yet deep. loved it. thank you for sharing.
hisprettygirl |
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