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Fear
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:53:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fear rises within me
A temperature so hot
Perspiration flows profusely
Stability I know not
Never have I known so much fear
It lays so heavily on me
Feel caught under a layer of ice
Too thick to ever break free
Shaking so violently within
Nausea follows all day
Trapped in a "Tom's Twister"
Spinning....spinning, unable to get away
Acidic bile roiling up and
Descension once again
Fire slowly smoldering
The skin now worn so thin
Aching for only truths
Just need to feel stability
All of these falsities I consumed
Slowly poisoning... killing me
When you look at this face
I'm not sure who you are
Eyes of blue have paltered
This time you've gone so far
Time has a way of healing
Souls that have gone through hell
One day I hope to hold your hand
Together our story we shall tell
6-22-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Fear
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 06:58:59 AM AEST
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strong write not sure what is going on but know I am here if you need someone to talk with
Shari |
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Re: Fear
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by shelby on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 07:09:41 AM AEST
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Sis,
I feel this fear and I have known these feelings. I wish I could erase this from your heart, I wish I could hug you close and tell you it is all going to be ok.
Michelle |
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Re: Fear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 08:59:09 AM AEST
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Sweetie ... I know how much you have and continue
to endure. It is so painful to watch you go through this.
Though, I know, I KNOW, it is nothing compared to
the hell in which you now reside. Sis, I just want you to
know I think you are doing remarkably well. You are
writing and leaning on those that love you ... and that's
all you can do, when times are tough and the darkness
surrounds ~
Always here for you
~MG
[... sending you an embrace from across our countries] |
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Re: Fear
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 11:31:27 AM AEST
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| Sadly I can relate so much to this poem and I feel what you mean with your words. Let's just never give up. Loved the poem, clear and flowing as it should. Keep writing you're a great poet!! |
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Re: Fear
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 04:09:19 PM AEST
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Well sis i wish i could be there
i feel your pain and fear and hope you will find your way out.PM me if you ever wanna talk.
love and hugs |
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Re: Fear
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 04:11:13 PM AEST
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I have a chant at my most painful times that I just keep repeating until the pain and hurt leaves. I share it with you now.
"I bless you with love and release you from my heart"
It has worked in my times of feeling totally lost.
Your work is proof you are travelling through all the healing doors and will make it with strength and wisdom to the place of your greatest being. Hugs |
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Re: Fear
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 02:13:08 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write about something not so beautiful my sister laura. wishing you a most gentle healing of your heart let time guide you if it can and just hold on to it's
gentle hand . . .
((((peace 2u my friend and hippie sister))))
Ben |
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Re: Fear
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 01:45:53 PM AEST
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This is beyond beautiful to me...
"Time has a way of healing
Souls that have gone through hell
One day I hope to hold your hand
Together our story we shall tell"~you
Let this faith hold your hand & embolden you through the fear...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme
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Re: Fear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 05:35:23 PM AEST
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| How well you have described a form of fear that is not shared by all. Depressive phases also tell of fear. Good flowing poem well written thank you from bern. |
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