|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Because I Love You!
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
Are we the one's who are damned,
if we show others an unbreakable unconditioned love,
we who want deeply to shed peace across this world,
which lies dressed in hate and lies,
mocked and shunned, because some don't understand
how one can love so fully and accept all,
leaving a swarm of graceful love,
"Do they know their true identity",
or are they those who build walls,
to keep only who they want around,
then a great force comes over,
and they shy away into lingured dust,
mocking us again, laughing,
thinking in their thoughts of wicked wounds,
hoping the one that once touched them, would soon perish, leave,
and never return, so they can keep there abode intact,
"I have been damned many a time,
I feel it ..... I hear it .... and taste it,
Does it hold me back,
I think not,
only gives me more power to love others even deeper,
the crowd in which I keep company,
knows my love,
its an unending river,
for if I only loved them,
I would die, alone,
though death is a gift,
of eternal love,
I can't accept that yet,
so that means while I am here,
I must give "All" my bounty,
my unending river, of great love,
for I have found this world to need much,
would you help,
my vine is growing weak without you,
love needs to be this world's music,
I can't do it alone,
Because I LOVE YOU!"
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
... [
2003-03-01 03:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:57:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very strong message indeed, good write
Shari |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:57:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I think I fell into that river of yours Valerie, and I thank God I did ... one of the best things to happen to me ... So I will respond with "yes, I'll help spread this message .. I LOVE YOU TOO!" :)))) Jan |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:12:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i can only try my best, but i reckon if i keep trying i will get good at it eventually |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:46:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Val,so well written I wouldnt expect less from you! Your messasge came out so clear!
I really loved reading this especially the part where it saids I've been Dambed so many times ! No It didnt hold you back thats what makes me enjoy you so much more Your strength! Christina |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:44:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| GREAT |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:36:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ahhhh you know i love ya and i love this too valerie, it's one of your sweetest writes and so dear, huggs always nessa |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I must give all my bounty, my unending river of great love...love needs to be this world's music. wonderful lines and a beautiful message. venkat |
|
|
Re: Because I Love You!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:40:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Valerie, you have sent a valuable message to the world to love one another. We have faith that love can overcome the evils. I'll be with you. Love, Gloria |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
