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For the Other Not Me
Contributed by
whisper
on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 07:04:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Release
Release me of the thoughts
I aught not have
The cries I hear in my ears
The moans and whins I can not fix
I am helpless watching from both far and near
Release Me
Dear Lord I pray for
Peace
For the Other
I have no fear knowing that you
Are with me
Release
My body of all the sickness I bare
I ask not for myself
But for the others
I Need to help
I ask for the strength for the forth
Coming
I ask not
Just for myself
Release
All my demons now resting
I can feel them boilin
They will bubble up and spill over
And then the illusion will be up
Release me of these responsiabilies
Let me chose who I need to help more
The family front is fine
But the others are grey
Release my heart of these felt
Obiligations
I know I owe them not
But Obiligations
A long ago spoken promise
I can not lie
I am left with nothing
but You Lord
Asking every night
Help him
Help
Him I pray
The lighthouse
In my life.
That was there so long
ago
Whisper
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whisper
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2007-06-23 07:04:30]
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 07:58:12 AM AEST
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A prayer that I am sure the universe will hear.
For before it is asked your strength and faith will grant each and every word. Remain strong and continue to write with such awareness. |
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 08:00:50 AM AEST
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moving write
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:25:32 AM AEST
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Release, the deepest prayer of an anquished heart. A wish, a desire to no longer feel if all we can feel is pain. I think you captured this idea well. With a great flow and utter poetic ideas. A work well worth the read. I do pray you find a release one that keeps you here with us writing about the wonders one day.
BRAVO!
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 06:52:10 AM AEST
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i loved this,and i feel i can relate a bit ;/
nice job |
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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Thank you All
for the coments and the read.
* I am having comp problems to email direct
Whisper |
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Re: For the Other Not Me
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by inlovewithaladd on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 09:38:45 AM AEST
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nice.
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