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Home Sweet Home
Contributed by
needledancing
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Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 10:53:35 PM in AEST
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In my quiet moments when I am alone,
I search for the real place that I can call home.
It doesn't have walls or material things,
When I head home soul is all I can bring.
It's a home where my heart can be peaceful and light.
It's grounded with love and embraces me tight.
The wisdom of feelings are all mine to share.
Funny somehow there are no others there.
I can hear such grand music and dance like a queen.
It surely is home after all that I've seen.
Flowers with breath of angels fresh scents,
No mortgage to pay, no raising of rents.
My mind is the home that comforts me best.
Healing my body and providing its rest.
I'll travel home any chance that exists.
It's safer than here, no challenge or risks.
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needledancing
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 12:11:29 AM AEST
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Oh ND, this was striking. So beautifully soft and inspirational.
I'm with you .. the inner self is the best place to be for quiet
moments and much needed relaxation. The world has
become such a noisy, busy place .. and there are times
when you just want to stop its spinning and get off, yes?
Beautiful write, my friend. This is poetry in all its glorious
serenity!! : )
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 12:25:24 AM AEST
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A wonderful poem... when man finds his peace and resting place... in that invisible, intangible,inexpressible,unfathomable, within his mind and heart; then he has found peace. (home)
Great write.
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 12:40:45 AM AEST
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this was so comforting, well written and just warms the heart
Shari |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Dom on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 03:41:02 AM AEST
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I couldn't agree more!
We know ourselves better than anybody, so it makes sense that in the solitude of our own company is when peace can most easily be found.
Lovely write!
Dom |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 08:38:44 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this write immensely & I have to admit that in part it is because this is a topic matter near & dear to my own soul & that I frequently write about myself...
"And in my mind I still need a place to go
All my changes were there..."~Neil Young
I feel ya' on this flow. Great substance to this write that I leave your page sated by...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 09:03:45 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. Although I would also add, many is the time that when alone with my thoughts their volume can often make me wish for some other distraction. Be it music, movie, book or some other form of distraction.
My mind can be quite loud. Other times it quiets to a peaceful silence that is quite comforting. Home is where the heart is. Home is where ya hang yer hat. Home is... feeling comfortable.
I enjoyed this.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 03:43:46 PM AEST
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You have no idea how i enjoy this kind of writting i need to write something like this so bad and so i'm glad you wrote this, how i long for my home my old friends and even my old way of life at times. simply a touching and beautiful peice. so nice i can read your wonderfu work again. thanks for sharing this along with the experience . . .
((((ND))))
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 04:38:29 AM AEST
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You're right, of course. Home isn't so much a place as it is an emotional sanctuary where we feel right and real and whole and strong - and yes, comfortable and at peace. It is the place where we can weep openly, laugh freely and/or just be our own crazy selves.
Home. There just isn't that tops it really, I'd say. Well... except, I imagine... having discovered that the one you love lives in the same place.
Nicely done -
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