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Edens Mist
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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Edens Mist
Adam slowly awakening
In morning mists of Edens light
Stretching and yawning sleepily
He recalls a dream last night
Walking with God in paradise
Surveying Gods creation all around
Adam remarked how perfect it was
Only one discrepancy had he found
Every type of living creature
In your blessed garden I can see
To every creature you formed a mate
Every creature that is , but me
I sit and watch in wistful joy
As birds fly wing to wing
And listen in total awe
As songs of love they sing
I see in every creature
Whether on land or waters deep
The need to have a mate
A special love to keep
~~~~God Answers~~~~
When you awake
In Edens mists youll see
A creation just for you
A loving gift from me
Give her your respect
Share with her your life
You are now complete "
Here is Eve your wife
Russ
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Re: Edens Mist
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:01:16 AM AEST
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| I always love the comments before your poems - it's a unique way to lead into what you want to say :)) This poem has such a dreamlike flow to it and I like its message. ... Jan |
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Re: Edens Mist
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:10:14 AM AEST
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beautiful it probably was that way can't imagine anyother good write
Sharon |
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Re: Edens Mist
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 06:19:29 AM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me, Russ.... both with your poem..and your notes.... It was a pleasure meeting you the other night.
Jenni |
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Re: Edens Mist
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:49:03 AM AEST
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| Russ I will say one of my favs! This was so well done I truly enjoyed reading this! Makes us wonder! Great peice! Christina |
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Re: Edens Mist
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:14:15 PM AEST
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And God made Eve....
to make the Garden perfect!!!!! :-)
Nice write!!! {{{{russ}}}}
Angel always.....
Godspeed........ 0:-) |
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