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Fire
Contributed by
Nessiecat
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I fought fire with fire, so the flames rose high,
every retort added heat to the pyre.
If I’d used water to dampen the flames,
maybe the outcome would not have been shame.
Copyright ©
Nessiecat
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2003-03-01 01:40:00]
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Re: Fire
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:12:58 AM AEST
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short but to the point and a very good lesson
good write
Sharon |
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Re: Fire
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:51:49 AM AEST
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| The message is very clear well done on this short peice! Christina |
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Re: Fire
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:12:41 PM AEST
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| wonderful short prose, brings a good message, thanks for sharing this |
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