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Adrift
Contributed by
GlenDavid
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Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 10:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The lights are on, but I’m not home. I've wandered off somewhere, somewhere alone.
Life’s happenings hit you, cloud and darken your vision; light and mind...a darker shade I now envision.
So off I wander my mind a dimming flickering light. Others close to me - notice change. A darker reason is abound to make me estranged.
See, people they hurt you, knock me off course while they sleep tight, I’ve never known love so close, so off and away I will weep.
The actions of others have a consequence good and bad, sometimes the bad stay attached to me and they make me real sad.
Darkened is my mind now, I want nothing more, than to drift unnoticed with lights dimmed and flickering - to a sunny lonely shore...
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GlenDavid
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2007-06-21 22:12:50]
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Re: Adrift
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by shelby on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 04:18:04 AM AEST
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Glen,
this is so painful, feelings many of us can relate to. People at times just dont know the pain they cause, sadly they dont care either, something wrong with our world these days i would say.
May the sun rise to shine its rays of soothing warmth around you and cease the sadness in your heart.
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Re: Adrift
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by Paddy on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:19:07 PM AEST
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| you dont need to be adrift, dark poem |
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